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But... My eyes stay right along the right side. I think that adding something to the left side in the background with the same or similar range of light and darkness will help make the composition more complete. I barely take notice to the details you put in the background even though they look really neat.
Also, I think that the title could be a little more eye-catching. Right now it's kind of dark compared to the bottom character so the title doesn't get looked at until the eye travels up along the characters. I think it might help out.
Again, i love the artwork and everything, but maybe just something to add to make the use of space more "filled" and maybe lighten the title. But that's just my opinion. Nonetheless, good luck with your story and all. ^^ And i hope i helped, even a little.
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